HOW SCREENPLAY EDITING WORKS

Every project begins with understanding your script, your goals, and where you are in the development process. Whether you’re revising a feature or episodic script for submission, or refining a draft in preparation for development, I provide clear, specific editorial insight focused on craft, structure, and execution.

SCREENPLAY EDITING SERVICES OFFERED

Script Analysis

A high-level editorial assessment of your screenplay’s concept, structure, characters, and dialogue. This service provides an overall evaluation of strengths, weaknesses, and areas for development, with clear guidance on next steps.

Detailed Script Review

An in-depth, line-by-line editorial review addressing story logic, structure, pacing, characterization, dialogue, and continuity. Feedback is provided directly on the script, with detailed notes to help clarify issues and strengthen execution.

Script Editing & Polishing

A hands-on line-level edit focused on refining scenes, descriptions, dialogue, and transitions. This service improves clarity, flow, and impact while preserving your voice and intentions as the writer.

Script Formatting

Professional formatting of your screenplay to industry standards, ensuring correct layout, spacing, and presentation. Available for scripts prepared in Final Draft or Microsoft Word.

Script Proofreading

A final pass to identify and correct remaining grammar, spelling, or typographical, after editorial revisions and formatting have been completed.

David Lombardino, Editor & Consultant

Editorial Judgment Built on Experience

I work with screenwriters at every stage of their careers—from writers developing an early draft to those refining scripts for submission, development, or production.

I’ve edited scripts across a range of formats, including features, pilots, and short films. In every case, my role is the same: to bring clear, experienced editorial judgment to the script and help guide focused, well-considered revision.

If you’re ready to begin, you can start a new screenplay editing project below.

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NEW TO WORKING WITH AN EDITOR?

If you’d like to get a sense of my editing approach before committing, you’re welcome to request a free sample edit. I’ll review the opening pages of your screenplay and return them with tracked changes and brief comments.

To request a sample edit, email me the first 5–10 pages of your screenplay in Final Draft, PDF, or Word format along with the service you are interested in.

HAVE A PARTICULAR APPROACH IN MIND?

If there’s a specific focus, concern, or approach you’d like me to be aware of—such as voice, structure, or submission goals—you’re welcome to share that context before starting.

You can reach me by email, or include notes when submitting a project through the order form.

Genres I Work In

I regularly edit screenplays across a range of genres, including drama, comedy, thriller, science fiction, fantasy, and documentary.

If your project doesn’t fall neatly into one of these categories, you’re welcome to reach out to confirm whether your project is a good fit.

PROFESSIONAL AFFILIATIONS

I support and promote the work of the following professional organizations:

READY TO TAKE THE NEXT STEP WITH YOUR MANUSCRIPT?

If you’re considering editorial guidance and would like to talk through your project, I’d be glad to hear more about what you’re working on and how I might help.

If you have questions before getting started, you’re welcome to reach out by email.

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