Cover Letter Editing
Clarity. Purpose. Fit.
Since 2008, I’ve helped candidates refine cover letters and application correspondence
so they present themselves clearly, effectively and professionally—without
overexplaining or weakening their candidacy.
How I Work with Cover Letters
I treat cover letters as targeted communications, not summaries of a resume or CV. Each letter must communicate clearly, effectively and professionally.
I assess how the letter functions in context—what role it plays alongside the rest of the application, what questions it answers, and what impression it creates. I focus on structure, emphasis, and wording to ensure the letter reads as intentional, concise, and relevant.
My feedback centers on:
- Clarifying the purpose of the letter and aligning it with the application
- Refining structure so key points are clear and well positioned
- Strengthening wording and tone to convey professionalism and judgment
I provide specific guidance on what to revise and why, then refine the letter further so it supports the application without distracting from it.
Cover Letter Services
Cover Letter Editing & Feedback
Two Rounds of Review
This service provides in-depth editing and strategic feedback.
I work directly on:
- Structure, organization, and focus
- Tone, clarity, and professional alignment
- Positioning of experience and motivation
- Repetition, excess detail, and weak emphasis
You revise based on first-round feedback, and I refine the letter further in the second round to ensure cohesion and polish.
Cover Letter Proofreading
One Round of Review
This service addresses surface-level errors only.
Proofreading covers:
- Grammar and punctuation
- Spelling and typographical errors
- Agreement, tense, and basic word choice
This service does not include restructuring or strategic feedback.
Who You’ll Be Working With
I’m David Lombardino, founder of DLA Editors & Proofers. Since 2008, I’ve worked with applicants across fields and career stages on application correspondence used for academic programs, professional roles, and competitive opportunities.
My approach emphasizes clarity, judgment, and fit. I focus on how reviewers read cover letters, what weakens credibility, and how language and structure shape evaluation.
Applicants work with me when they want their cover letter to support their application professionally and effectively.
If you’re ready to begin, you can place your order below.
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